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For my essay I will be doing it on the Gods and Goddesses of Ancient Greece.
First Paragraph- Why Athena was so important and what she represented
Second Paragraph- The Parthenon and what it meant to them
Third Paragraph- Other Gods and Goddesses that were important
Fourth Paragraph- Things that happened that they thought were the Gods
Fifth Paragraph- Concluding paragraph that summarizes everything and concludes it
First Paragraph- Why Athena was so important and what she represented
Second Paragraph- The Parthenon and what it meant to them
Third Paragraph- Other Gods and Goddesses that were important
Fourth Paragraph- Things that happened that they thought were the Gods
Fifth Paragraph- Concluding paragraph that summarizes everything and concludes it
Overall this seems like it could be a good paper. Your descriptions of the third and fourth paragraphs seem a little thin. I still think there is a quality paper in there. Good luck, Connor!
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